lighting bug dream

the converstaiion between two lightning bug trying get you to play with them

can you see the musical music contruction

going on right now?                                      can you really see it?

do you wanna see our show tonight?

                              try to come oh please please.

we promise not to dissapoint you..

                              we just hang out and show you our..

talents, i know your got stuff to do

                                    but come out away from the city

away from the noise

                              come to the country side we...

promise to keep you entertain.

                                 so is it a deal?

let the

show begain                 

                                      shall we?

the milky stars lay low to the ground so you can rest your head on the softest cloud in the world. smell the flowers they smell like coke. their sweet but you cannot drink them unless your dream may want you to. This is your world you may controll it and noby else. can so dream away little one.

 

but wait?

                 what?

we rogot about the show!!!

yes we did, sorry about this....

               isnt it too late now?

ahhh yes it is.....

lets sing a melody.

a very short one!!!!

ok.......

rain

                           rain

why do you stay

with me tonight

i am sad

                           and alone

but god

is with me all the time.

Author's Note

wrote this not to long ago. enjoy the story read left to right

Reviews

[Brittany]

I like the concept. Could I suggest spacing between the lines? I think it might be easier to follow the conversation between the bugs that way. Also might want to re-read for typos. Nice job. Keep writing.

[Racy Daniel]

It's really interesting poem. I enjoyed very much reading this poem. I welcome you in this writerscafe. This is a vey good site to explore you. Please go ahead.

~~~~~~~~~~~~#@DANIEL