Stirring Me Slowly

I’m starting to float on your words

Your images arrest my thoughts

Wandering

I feel the sparkle of your lips

Of our passion

The heat in our kiss

Flaming

Storming my intelligence with your face

Striking sapphire

Tantalizing

Tempting precision

Shaking my soul

Like limber dogwood leafs

In April breeze

Observe how easy you stir me

In the whirlwind of your shadow

In the elegance of your poetic hands

Of your supple touch

In the glint of your eyes as you gaze over me

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I refer to the "stirrings" in my morning brew coffee very often when referring to my musings. I like your reference in the "Storming my intelligence with your face" line this says a lot with very little & I enjoy these lines... Observe how easy you stir me, In the whirlwind of your shadow. (I do so love the common threads that make our comprise) A nice flow to this write

[kentuck14]

Love those lines, "Like limber . . . of your shadow."

[Chris]

I like the glimpse you've given from behind your eyes.

[Bare trees]

What can I say except, that's what love is all about.

[barleygirl]

A softly whimsical poem that swirls with good autumn imagery blended with longing. Love your dynamic verbs & uninhibited descriptions. Love the title - it draws me in, wanting to read more (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, wonderful and amazing use of words and thoughts. The poem made the feel the need and the emotions in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Wórdsmíth]

Sounds good and pretty intoxicating with your words!! Yeh.. I think, you are really very better with your words .. Ha! Nice imagery. I enjoyed it!

[A. Amos]

Adore your writing simply elegant and neatly crafted

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I love it:) I am hooked now!

[Jenny Nelson]

A very pleasant and light feel you've conveyed. Great description; well chosen words. Nice!