Dream Lover

I’ll miss you

Dream Lover

I will miss you while you’re gone

My mind always seem to wander to you

I crave

Even though we have never touched

I will miss you

Dream Lover

I will miss you when you’re gone.

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

simple and sweet

[Nobody.]

not lame. it's a lovely sentiment. the moment lovely sentiments in the forms of poems become lame....we may all just forget how to smile. I like it. It is simple, but also honey-sweet and it rolls naturally and honestly beginning to end. cheers!

[Monday Parker]

Lame I know. -Just a passing thought.