Unecesary

Unecesary

A Poem by Tara♥Undefined♥

I swear it rains everyday anymore, like it did before, don’t know why  i care, everything about you is amazing,but u drive me crazier each day, 


Chorus: You make me cry we say goodbye I swear each time I die inside oh baby, im so crazy. The cuts upon my wrist remind me of those fits, I love you but your doing this, I cant let u keep doing this, This blood upon my hand reminds me of the way you stand by me when I needed help but it also tells me that your s**t is making, me wanna die. I already died inside. 

 

I swear it rains everyday, whether you’re here or  not, because of how we fought, I cant go on if we just cant move on, forgive and forget, I cant go through this, Forgive or forget me. 

 

Chorus: 

 

I swear the sun will never shine again, I needed love, I need a friend to catch me when I fall, to help me through it all, but if u cant do that for me, There is no point, Babe don’t you see, the pain inside the tears I've cried, the blood I've shed the times you’ve fled, oh baby x4 I just needed a friend, (Whyd ya do this to me)

© 2010 Tara♥Undefined♥


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Tara♥Undefined♥
please review this new song :)

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This is a wonderful poem I love it... Keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


you have done well expressing yourself here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sooo...amazing! I totally agree with Mary and Haifa, you should make a youtube account and sing it! Now if only you had a band or some way to get the correct music with this..
Well amazing anyways : )

-Pokie

Posted 13 Years Ago


you could make this into a great song :) i believe you could do it easily, and you should! very nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow........next pop artist!
please give it music!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this is fantastic and would only be better with music!

Posted 13 Years Ago


another awesome song, i agree with Haifa you should put them on youtube.

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved it fantastic great job easy to relate to and 100% perfection i wanna hear it now

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet poem. I love the way it all flows so smoothly.
Touching work. I cant wait to hear one of your songs.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was sweet. Great song.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 29, 2010
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Tara♥Undefined♥
Tara♥Undefined♥

canton, OH



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I am Savannah! Heello!!!^^ I love writing(obviously) I love to sing and dance and stuff. I like the rainy days better than sunny ones and Im crazy too. Well, Idk wat else to tell you.. more..

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