Love Story...

Just a personal narrative I wanted to share with my ahamzing writerscafe family!!

As the soft autumn wind blew, I gazed into the deep brown eyes of my love.

 The sun is high in the sky, but the cool air tells us of the changing times. All 

I can think is, "No matter what I will always love him." I have never loved 

someone so much. I didn't even believe I'd ever find true love  .... I had really 

been hopeless romantic for my  whole life, never finding a long-lasting 

relationship. To put it more bluntly, I'd never been in love yet. I thought it was 

only in the movies most days, then I saw him. I had known him for some 

time, but never really talked to him, or gotten to know him. It had been a year 

since I had actually seen him at this point. That's when I saw it. I looked up 

and he was standing there and I saw the sparkle of those eyes. Id never 

been so comfortable with someone so fast before. We instantly clicked, it 

was like fate had destined our meeting, but days passed and we managed 

to forget about it, we continued with school, every so often I thought on him, 

Id imagine how he'd of changed in those few days. I know, stupid, a few 

days and I'm acting as if it had been years, but it felt like it had been, in a 

way I cant explain. Like he had changed everything for me in a few 

hours.And he had. I was leaving school one day, and I glanced towards the 

door, just curious, for whatever reason, and I saw it again, the eyes. Now, 

I'm not going to try and confuse you. He was not a guy most girls think of as 

handsome, he's not the best-looking guy around, but he was only one I saw 

and he still is. He became the most important thing in my life. I loved him, 

but I just didn’t know it yet... I think on it now, and I think the first time I really 

realized that I loved him. It was the time I stayed up all night on the phone 

with him at my place. I lyed alone on the couch staring at the fish tank , 

watching and wondering. It was the first time I said  "love you." In that 

manner. I mean Id said it before. Before we were together. When we were 

just playing around. I remember him being awkwardly silent, as if unsure of 

whether or not I was serious. I remember that night on the phone. He said "I 

love you too." back and my heart almost melted, I swear. That night he 

became my "Koala Bear" and I became his "Panda", that night he became 

my world. That would never change. I feel so stupid sometimes, and blush 

at my silent thoughts of our "future" It gets my hopes up, and I feel like I 

shouldn’t do that to myself, but in some way I know Ill never lose him, I know 

he's mine forever, and no matter how the seasons pass and time moves on, 

I will never stop loving him. He will forever be my Romeo, and I his 

Juliet....Or maybe that's not true, maybe I am just his and he is just mine. I 

mean Romeo and Juliet already had there turn. Now, it is our time to shine. I 

gaze into the beautiful face and remember why I love him. It happens every 

time. ( Whether he knows it or not.) ♥

Author's Note

PLease review, and this time... I dont care about how well-written it is... I just want some feedback.. I mean this story is a large chink of my life.. I dont want that graded for perfection. So please just tell me about what you thought of the happenenings in the story. Thank you :)

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a start to a great love story. I would fill in a few more details on there adventures together, make different scenes if you will but your characters are relatable and I can picture them in my mind. If this is about your own love it is a great start. I would just love to know a little more detail about there first spoken words in person, dialogue.

[Allison]

Awe :) I love this. Very nice.

-Pokie

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet story. It was very uplifting and powerful.
Love can be a scary thing, but this story makes
the reader crave it.

[Mary]

it's very cute...so you love nick? hope it lasts. sorry i'm going to bed so this isn't the best review in the world.