Dark doodle I

evil essence

enchants echo

purifies perfidy

but burns beliefs.

Author's Note

a very careless write

Reviews

[Gaurav]

Careless writes maybe but it surely depicts perfection of using words to portray a theme...someday, i too will reach there, if time persists..nice write

[moog-drika]

You are already there my friend. I really love the simplicity and depth your write possesses.
Anyway, thanks so much :D

[barleygirl]

This has an essence of Bad Bunny (Rob Trakofler), the way you use words starting with "e" & the alliteration in following lines, too. You write this without much connective tissue (short words that make things sound more conversational), which also reminds me of Rob & also like SinisterPotatoe (not sure if you read him here, he can be a little obscure). Since I love reading both those guys, I also love your poem in this complex but intense/concentrated style (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[moog-drika]

It feels so great to see one of my favorite writers visiting my old poetry! Can't describe how happy it makes me.
I agree that too. I felt the same when I first read the works of Bad Bunny (Rob Trakofler). Of course his ones are on another level that ends up intriguing me.
Actually there are very few people here who have inspired me a lot through their work and both of you are among them.
You both have given me a lot of interesting imagery to envision. So thank you so much for all these presents as well as for the praise.
Lots of love.

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Sometimes our carelessness can create more be better piece then total focus and precision of our thoughts. I believe our believes have to be burn in order to feel your self without any shields and boundaries. It's ridiculous how people sometimes hidden behind they rules and believes. Very good write you make me thing.

[moog-drika]

That's absolutely true. Carelessness can bring so many angles to the poet and that is too subconsciously. Thank you so much for your precious interpretation. Loved it and I agree.

[light and ashes]

A very interesting write....
not sure that I completely understand it.
It's odd to me that you describe in the comments as a careless poem, because it is tinged with such seriousness to me.
Maybe it's about a careless person? I don't know. Just a thought.
Probably overthinking this, but it's a very good write.

[moog-drika]

Not at all. Every thought and interpretation from every reader adds a whole new meaning to the poem. That's why I keep it blank and let my reader pour colors on it. Thank you so much for your color.

[light and ashes]

You're welcome :)

[Vin]

write on girl!!! Don't stop so soon.

[moog-drika]

Ahh this was a much needed advice to have me encouraged.
Thanks a lot Vin!

[Vin]

Pleasure's mine. Looking forward to your writings and more convesations

[Onlyme]

Wow, great little scrawl this Moog-drika.

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much D!
Missed you :'D

[DAH]

The essence of evil is to burn what's beautiful, but now I've learned that
it also "enchants echoes", while burning beliefs, too.

A mystical write, moog-d!

DAH

[moog-drika]

There are a lot more left to tell through words. Hope you love to confuse yourself. Hhaha
Thanks a bunch for your vision.

[DAH]

My pleasure!

[wordman]

purifies and burns belief,sorta lurking in your mind

[moog-drika]

always lurking in my mind haha

[Jibey]

But it is throwaway style encapsulates the destructive nature of evil. Nicely bound together by the alliteration..

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much for your precise interpretation. It means a lot :D