When murk shines bright

When murk shines bright

A Poem by moog-drika
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I don't know why I love this write so much

"

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The sunlight chirped again 

as it polished the horizon.

It tried peeping through an abyss,

but unfortunately, 

it tipped over.

 

There was a gorgeous nebula

that composed the whole scenario,

with a clamor.


It was all planned.

© 2020 moog-drika


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This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

7 Months Ago

I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it hel.. read more



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In the grand nature of things, what happens and why happens are questions that are craved by creatives since the dawn of big bang..it excites you too...nice read

Posted 6 Months Ago


moog-drika

6 Months Ago

This is so true. The mystery of the universe is something that can never quench your thirst. Thanks .. read more
What a beautiful use of words. I love to come across a poet who uses the words they feel rather than being caught up with meaning. Good write.

Posted 6 Months Ago


moog-drika

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much. This is how I pen my thoughts down. :D
Our hopes lift at the sight of a new dawn, wondering if this will be a good day, Hope, luck and wishful thinking bring us infinite possibilities, but the dice have been rolled and all we can do is wait with baited breath and see what will be play out.
Perhaps at dusk we should review and be thankful it wasn't any worse 😀
I like this write too. No anger, just acceptance that we do have a say, just not as big a say as we think.

Posted 7 Months Ago


moog-drika

7 Months Ago

This review actually helped me understand my own piece in different way. These 3 factors, hope, luck.. read more
the vivid personification makes this so creative and alive.
You take a vision of nature and stamp it on our memories.
and i think that WAS the poet's plan.

j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

7 Months Ago

These words really made my day. Thank you so much for taking a ride to my write and thank you so muc.. read more
This is very fresh & inventive: "sunlight chirped" . . . "polished the horizon" -- totally unique ways of describing everyday things. "Peeping thru an abyss & it tipped over" -- I wish I could possess the mind that thinks stuff like this up. Your sassy playfulness comes across loud & clear, which is a quality I see reflected in your profile pic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

7 Months Ago

I always say this and I will still say that reading your write is like a magic pill for me as it hel.. read more
Cool imagery in this one.
Like a back drop for one of this inspirational scenes or posters.

Posted 7 Months Ago


moog-drika

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your review. :D
I loved that first stanza, this is very good

Posted 7 Months Ago


moog-drika

7 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch! :D
This is like the British summer.
You blink and suddenly a Nebula is displaying herself like the girl next door.

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

hahaha Nebula is certainly a very mysterious character. Thanks a bunch for your interpretation. :D
This is a wonderful write, most enjoyed this

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch. ❤️
you can never trust a nebula Moog they are shifty characters! one day all sparkly and inviting the next eating up your chasms and filling up your voids with fresh shiny topsoil:/ yes they are sneaky sneaky sneaky

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

8 Months Ago

hahahaahaha I never laughed so hard by reading an interpretation that too of my poetry!!
Yes,.. read more

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Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words. I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..

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