This poem makes me think of how life involves constant change. It is cyclical, and we often find ourselves back at the place we started, but our cycles also make an impact on the world around us. Sometimes, we get so caught up in our own cycles that we don't see the impact we have on others. We need our cycles (sleep, eating, breathing) to survive, but we also have the power to decide which direction our cycles take us.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
This is soooo true and relatable. Such cyclone makes us keep cycling around our own system and we fe.. read moreThis is soooo true and relatable. Such cyclone makes us keep cycling around our own system and we feel nothing but trapped in it.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. They added a very vivid meaning to the piece to think about. :D
Both grief and joy are impermanent in life. A little humor can be really handy in going through all of it
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Absolutely! Couldn't agree more. Life's a rollercoaster, full of ups and downs. And a sprinkle of hu.. read moreAbsolutely! Couldn't agree more. Life's a rollercoaster, full of ups and downs. And a sprinkle of humor can definitely make the ride a bit smoother.
Thanks for the interpretation. Means a lot :D
he entire poem is like this massive paradox of contrasting thoughts whirling through our minds as we read.
"Doubt and mettle bargain/ for making a change"
i like the oxymoron "classy cyclone" with great alliteration to boot.
I think we all have to laugh in life...the good and bad will happen in cycles...
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I think this is how life is, full of paradox and oxymoron. Tried to depict a bit through the write. .. read moreI think this is how life is, full of paradox and oxymoron. Tried to depict a bit through the write. So glad to have your interpretation on my piece. I too think laughing can make 'passing the cyclone phase' easier.
Thanks so much for taking a ride to the write :D
Whenever you see a cyclone from the angle pictured, it look so pretty and looks like its madeof fluff... Intil itsoveryourhead and trying to priseit from your neck.
Renewal does happen like that, Ma Nature doesn't mess about with quotesand schedules, she just recycles the lot and lets us start again, oblivious to the fact it could have bern her warning, maybe even her final one before all our necks go pop next time.
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Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Wow! this interpretation makes the write even more meaningful. It gives me a clear picture of what I.. read moreWow! this interpretation makes the write even more meaningful. It gives me a clear picture of what I was feeling which was kinda blurred till I read yours.
I agree with every word you have put down here. Yet we will never realize which one is the golden opportunity and which one is her final warning.
Thank you so much for such a detailed write. Means a lot.
Almost feels like the circle of life. Change/ death / destruction are all necessary for rebuilding and evolving.
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
True. it's like destruction happens for inception and vice versa.
Thanks a bunch for sharing.. read moreTrue. it's like destruction happens for inception and vice versa.
Thanks a bunch for sharing your thoughts.
Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words.
I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..