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A Poem by moog-drika

Cyclone turns rosy
as halo drowns in ardent serenity.
Both the doubt and mettle bargain
for making a change.

Renewal happens; a dash.

Serenity drowns in halo
as it savors classy cyclone.

Situation cycles and laughs.

© 2020 moog-drika


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This poem makes me think of how life involves constant change. It is cyclical, and we often find ourselves back at the place we started, but our cycles also make an impact on the world around us. Sometimes, we get so caught up in our own cycles that we don't see the impact we have on others. We need our cycles (sleep, eating, breathing) to survive, but we also have the power to decide which direction our cycles take us.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

11 Months Ago

This is soooo true and relatable. Such cyclone makes us keep cycling around our own system and we fe.. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome dear friend.



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A good poem presenting changes and changes going on.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Oh my f*****g lord you couldn't have put a little more effort into this garbage peace

Posted 5 Months Ago


moog-drika

5 Months Ago

No. I love to be lazy. :)
"Peaceout!"
life changes constantly, this is a wonderful write

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the interpretation, Means a lot :D
he entire poem is like this massive paradox of contrasting thoughts whirling through our minds as we read.
"Doubt and mettle bargain/ for making a change"
i like the oxymoron "classy cyclone" with great alliteration to boot.
I think we all have to laugh in life...the good and bad will happen in cycles...
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

I think this is how life is, full of paradox and oxymoron. Tried to depict a bit through the write. .. read more
This is a really good write, I enjoyed this write. makes me think of life

Posted 9 Months Ago


moog-drika

8 Months Ago

Thanks a bunch for the praise. I feel the same sometimes. :D
I love your choice of words! Well done! You really are one of the most unique writers!

Posted 10 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

Ahh thank you so much for such a big compliment. I love your thoughts too, they are beautiful.
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A unique poem about the circle of things, I guess no one ever learns and everything happens over and over.

Posted 10 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

That's what the nature of nature is. Thank you so much for sharing your thought.
JungLee

10 Months Ago

You are welcome!
Whenever you see a cyclone from the angle pictured, it look so pretty and looks like its madeof fluff... Intil itsoveryourhead and trying to priseit from your neck.
Renewal does happen like that, Ma Nature doesn't mess about with quotesand schedules, she just recycles the lot and lets us start again, oblivious to the fact it could have bern her warning, maybe even her final one before all our necks go pop next time.
😀

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

Wow! this interpretation makes the write even more meaningful. It gives me a clear picture of what I.. read more
Lorry

10 Months Ago

Welcome 😀
Almost feels like the circle of life. Change/ death / destruction are all necessary for rebuilding and evolving.

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

10 Months Ago

True. it's like destruction happens for inception and vice versa.
Thanks a bunch for sharing.. read more

Blown away this breezy mane my friend... your words here are a fine example of creating mighty images in the mind and the eyes of your readers.. one of the reasons I first fell in love with poetry.... All Good Things,

Neville

Posted 11 Months Ago


moog-drika

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for all the positive words and sharing your thoughts on the write. It means a lot... read more
Neville

11 Months Ago


you are most welcome :)

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