Airglow

After a looooooong time.

My insomnia has got up early tonight.

It’s zero dark hundred now

floating across the cadence of tangle. 

While the aurora prepares to nourish the profile,

I take a chance to sense the mirage extracted from its maxim. 

Appetizing it is. 

Simultaneously, 

the navy starts to fade itself slightly

and invites cyanic steam to float.

All the sedate dots keep blinking

until my insomnia falls asleep.. 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I hope you get over your insomnia. Take care.

[moog-drika]

Hope the same. Stay safe. :D

[Sami Khalil]

::::::::)))))))))))))))

[CLR9]

yeah it's really bad. It sounds like a pome tryin to be a pome without much thought. Kinda like a kid who makes a rocket out of legos, except it just looks like a bunch of blocks retardedly smashed together, and you have to say "hey look at that, that's good!" because it's a kid and you don't wanna hurt their feelings. It's kinda like this pome.

[moog-drika]

ohh okay. Sorry that you had to go through a bad potry :'D

[CLR9]

Yeah, well, in case you haven't noticed, I am a poetic genius. So is most folks on WC. So, you don't make the cut.

[Lathen Griffiths]

As soon as my head hits the pillow my mind decides to wake up and get creative so I find this very relatable, a lovely read.

Lathen

[moog-drika]

ahahha I can so relate to it. Won't call mine that creative though but thank you so much :D

[Chris]

I've watched across the sea for a long, long time and the waves movement and the effervescence always seems to take one away from their nows to the tomorrows.

[moog-drika]

That's beautiful. The write made me feel like I was somewhere else for a white :D

[Antonio Soler]

spectacular writing, You ability to set the tone early in the beginning and end with a clear and thoughtful insight is amazing. Great writing.

[moog-drika]

ahh that made my day. Thanks so much for the positive words. They mean a lot :'D

[Leslie Philibert]

Liked this, I sleep badly, wake up and literally ghost around my house...this poem describes this feeling excellently!

[moog-drika]

I knew most of the sufferers would relate to it. I too ghost around my house like you haha.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. The compliment has made my night.

[Coyote Poetry]

I struggle to find sleep dear friend. I must meditate to find sleep. My mind never stop working. I understand the poem my friend. Hello from Michigan. I hope you are doing okay.
Coyote

[moog-drika]

I always fail to stay focused whenever I try to meditate. And since you are the victim as well, you will understand my situation.
And yes I'm doing well, much better than the previous days, although still weak.
Anyways, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and all the advices you gave. I have been following them and getting effective results.
Thanks a bunch.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.