i am

who am i?
you are a loser they tell me
you are fat they tell me
you are pathetic they tell me

who am i?
you are emo they tell me
you are a f*g they tell me
you are lame they tell me

who am i?
you are anti-social they tell me
you are weird they tell me
you are a loner they tell me

who am i?
you are weak they tell me
you are ugly they tell me
you are stupid they tell me

who am i?
they tell me i am a loser
they tell me i am fat
they tell me i am pathetic
they tell me i am emo
they tell me i am a f*g
they tell me i am lame
they tell me i am anti-social
they tell me i am weird
they tell me i am a loner
they tell me i am weak
they tell me i am ugly
they tell me i am stupid
they tell me all of these things
about who i am;
what I've become
but what do i think?

who am i?
I am a winner
i am healthy
i am not pathetic
i am a survivor
i am understanding
i am reserved
i am different
i am caring
i am beautiful
i am strong in so many ways
i am smart
i am me

who am i?
I am myself.
who are you?

Author's Note

yeah... :)

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Hey I love this. Well done.

[Just Me]

wow well written.

[Shy Girl]

Amen girl. To often we listen to others and their conceptions of us become our own. They become the voices inside our heads that hurt conntinously and only stop when we make them... My friend recently was almost lost to us and he is always telling me that I am me, and that's ok. Very well done and so simple yet speaks pages... thank you for sharing with me =)

nice ending. good s**t.

[TheElfPrincess]

A question we all ask ourselves once, who am I? A good poem. And whatever you think of yourself, I truly love your writing.

[Helpless]

very interesting style and format! nice!

[Tkess]

Sometimes harsh words can give you the inspiration you need to rise above the bullshit.