Dad

My sister wrote this poem, not me.

DAD

I remember you.
You kept balance in my life.
Strong, funny, loving.
Made me smile no matter what.
Old age wasn't a suspect.
The signs developed.
Nothing made it easy.
Death on his way, I said goodbye.
Never to forget.

Author's Note

My older sister wrote this for our dad, comments be kind. :)

Reviews

[stars are far]

Amazing
i loved that :) wish you good luck :)

[serpent]

wonderful words for a wonderful relation!

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

We all can clearly see how much your dad meant to you guys. Touching write. I wish you the best :)

[Tate Morgan]

I love it I cannot but see thew value placed on your father and Im all for that

[Emunah June.]

Aww...thats so sad. I know its not really the same, my ferret died 2 days ago and I was grief stricken.

[Obbligato]

Great poem
the shortness of it makes it that much more meaningful
I could imagine it as a little something you would recite to yourself just to remember him
Very powerful poem

[D1218]

Short and simple - yet I could feel the emotion behind it
Last 2 lines made me sort of sad

[Kena]

Saddened.. Kristen wrote this, or one of the other sisters? Tell them I said well done.