Walking Tragedy

Walking Tragedy

A Poem by MorbidSweet

Blood and tears running down her cheeks
She's just a walking tragedy

Her lips quiver and her body shakes
Coldly, he stares at her, with no shame

Badly bruised and forever scarred
Slowly breaking her fragile heart

But now her torture ends tonight
She's packing her bags, taking flight

He screams as she walks out the door
But that doesn't matter anymore

© 2008 MorbidSweet

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This is so sad but so beautiful. I can feel the hopelessness in this. I usually say something helpful for the poem, but I think you pretty much hit the jackpot.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love your style, I think I told that before.... you get to the point , and in a very beautiful way.... I could feel the pain but also the hope at the last line .... if there was nothing left. its better she will go .... thank you , Yossi

Posted 10 Years Ago

i loved this poem. it reminds me of so many of my own feelings.
now after reading this poem, i'm inspired to write something right now.
good work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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