Three Words

Would you kindly help me to down my pride?
These whispers still echo with the pain inside
Would you kindly give back all I had?
And would you kindly say I'm not that bad?

Would you kindly shut-up and hear my voice?
Or would you kindly go and turn down the noise?
And maybe even tell me what to choose
So I know which to save and which to lose

Would you kindly teach me to set the tone?
I never meant to leave her all alone
F**k me for being stupid by saying goodbye
I'm more idiotic than I thought; I just wanna die

Would you kindly read this and try to understand
Hurting someone I love is something I can't stand
So would you kindly tell me to stop crying now?
I can't seem to move on; I don't know how

Now, would you kindly tell me to stop writing?
That I'm hung-over and there's no use fighting
Would you kindly tell me I'm free from sin?
But would you kindly tell me I can still win?

Would you kindly tell me to start anew?
Just say the words and I know what to do
Would you kindly do it for my own sake?
It's no wonder how many these three words make

Reviews

[New Theory]

Witty rhyming and a good flow, make this poem an enjoyable read.

[Oran]

Thanks. I got very little friends here

[New Theory]

Dont worry you will make a lot of good friends here, people at writers cafe are extremely awesome and helpful in writing. Feel free to send friend requests to any one and do read their stuff, this way we share and encourage others, hence the community grows, in case you need anything, please feel free to drop a mail. :)