Can this last forever?

Can this last forever?

A Poem by Michelle Lea

Last forever you ask yourself??

As you stare into his deep dark brown eyes...

You feel like it could never possibly end.

As you watch as he leans toward you and smiles...

You begin to realize there's probably no reason to ask yourself if it will ever end.

Laying together, all snuggled up so close that the air can't breathe between your skin.

Morning has arrived at last......

Can this last forever you ask??

Well the answer is a definate yes, we will meet again...

Re-living each moment of what we did in the past.

And making new memories that will forever last!

© 2009 Michelle Lea


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The only way to make it last forever is based on the choice how you want to keep it or remember it well...

It's a very nice feeling to know how we'd like to have the most cherished memories to last forever...

Other than that, it's really good tho...



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The only way to make it last forever is based on the choice how you want to keep it or remember it well...

It's a very nice feeling to know how we'd like to have the most cherished memories to last forever...

Other than that, it's really good tho...



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As a hopeless romantic, I can empathize. I have been in such a position, where I ponder if love will last, or if it is worth the risk. I love the way this poem is written. The rhyme scheme is adequate. And most of all, this poem has passion. I hope to return for more reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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