Does anyone even care at all?

Does anyone even care at all?

A Poem by Samantha
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I know this isn't great, but it sort of popped into my head one night... Enjoy.

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I pick at my nails until they Break, 
and when they finally do I get Sad. 
Like everything else that's "just a fad." 

Should I Pick Up the Pieces, 
or leave them where they fall?
Does anyone even care at all?
 

© 2013 Samantha


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Hm, not my favorite, however I do like the metephor. The implications of the piece. It's a simply poem, I'd ike to see a wider range of vocabulary, though that is just a personal preference really.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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peace, love, Empathy Samantha Teresi Oh yeah, I like to use ellipses... more..

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