Improving the Choices Made

A poem about creating a different path

At a certain age, we are unreachable

We consider ourselves mature

Thinking that every impression is a grand one

Not knowing that our consciousness effect all

In addition, we affect other lives around us

Pushing away reason and morality

 

Many believe this is a part of growing up

When those grand thoughts backfire

Feelings of being lost crowds the mind

Ignoring the inner voice of reason

Laughing at the tiny version of self

Telling the being to alter the path

 

The severe dilemma bestowed

Has the mind creating different approaches

Replaying the consequences selected

Understand that the future not been written

The upcoming theories will enhance self

Mapping out a fresh phase

 

Crafting an enriched non-fiction variety

Paving the way for the future descendants

Remembering life continues in motion

Do not allow a forgotten existence

Every soul has a void to fill in this cosmos

Achieving this is possible without losing self

 

Accepting these words above to discover

Believing in making altered decisions

Helping steer the common sense forward

Toward a renewed but improved self

Author's Note

This is a poem I wrote for a friend whose son was just sentenced for 15 month. I will be sending him this work, in hope he takes it to heart and apply the method.

Reviews

[Mercedes Caridad Sanche..]

Wow, I seriously love the message you're trying to put out there, good stuff!

[hayzed]

i hope he gets the message as you wish he should. nice stuff though

[Tarry Franck]

There is much to take to heart in this piece and I hope he takes it the same to. Sorry about your friends son.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well, that's true and you put the case well. I think a lot of people get a little lost when they grow up!
I love the hope in the last verse.