wow...really?

Wow really???
Sitting there telling me you love me,
Taking my world to new levels,
I tell you I don’t know if I love you.
You tell me theres one way to find out,
And I say no!
Telling you I’m not ready for that,
You beg me to go on,
Promising it won’t hurt much
I stick to my grounds!
You say fine.
Looking away standing on that single lonely dock,
Feelings your hands upon my hips,
I begin to smile, you give me a single small kiss on the check.
Turning me to face you, kissing my lips softly.
Telling me you love me, putting your hands on my shoulders,
Pushing down forcing me to the ground.
Asking my self
Wow your really going to sit here and force me down?
Taking all my innocents away.
Calling me a b***h telling me you don’t need me.
Shattering my world,
As if it was glass.
Spread all over that dirty dock.
Crying pleading you to get off,
You tell me to shut up,
Your grunts gets louder as do my cries.
Listening to that creaking wood,
The splashing of the water against the rocks I lay there pleading no.
Wishing I wasn’t there,
Wondering if it will ever end.

Reviews

[Moth Phoenix]

This is a great poem :]
It's sad and upsetting but it flows VERY smoothly.
Great Job!!

[Bette]

omg! i hope this is not something that has happened to you. its a shame that it has happened to so many; they just take love away. people like that should be harmed.. really bad. i cant say how I would do it but it should be painful. great piece,