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Who knew it could hurt so much?

Who knew it could hurt so much?

A Poem by SarahCortland
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The pain we go through is often unbareable but often not understandable either so we question who knew or who knows when even we did not know

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Who knew it could hurt so much?
That first smile.
That first kiss.
That first thing seeming worth while.

Who knew it could hurt so much?
That first sign.
That first love.
The first time you lied saying you were fine.

Who knew it could hurt so much?
The first tears.
The first fight.
The first time facing your fears.

Who knew it could hurt so much?
The first scar.
The first drop of blood.
The first time not knowing who or where you are.

Who knew it could hurt so much?
That first goodbye.
That first time you knew.
The last of all the lies.

That only you could realize it hurt.  
That last touch.
That first realization.
But who knew it could hurt so much? 

© 2010 SarahCortland


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Great, great, great write! Very emotional, but clear.

The one thing I would say is you might want to re-word this lines, "That only you could realize it hurt." It is just a little awkward. I had to stop in the middle which was distracting.

OTHERWISE! I love it. Truly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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God what a beautiful poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


Who knew it could hurt so much?
The first scar.
The first drop of blood.
The first time not knowing who or where you are.

I so love these lines here,
This is wonderful and expressed so well.
I love this write it's amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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SarahCortland
SarahCortland

Owensboro, KY



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My name is Myspace Layouts. I love to Write poetry and I am currently working on one book. Sometimes I write short stories but Poetry is what i like to Stick to. Confidence Quotes .. more..

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