Eternity in hell

Eternity in hell

A Poem by SarahCortland
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An ending in which we fear

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The Walls are fire
The bodies are burned
We have one thing in common
None of us have learned

People are screaming
People are dying
We can't  leave this place
Your fears aren't lying

Our choices brought us here 
Our lives are done
We had our chance 
Now he has won

Here we will remain
Here we will end our life
We will die burning
For eternity we will live in strife

© 2010 SarahCortland


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Interesting, very interesting. you following the traditional christian belief of hell. Nice description.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"We have one thing in common
None of us have learned "
Very cool.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Good write. I like how you had a 'consistency' in the beginning of each stanza. Good message overall, well conveyed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good write here with excellent imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


WOW MAN THATS ALL I CAN SAY

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love your imagery and your writing. Great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful, your rhyme and flow is much more consistant than it was on your other poems. I loved this. Sad and painful but beautiful!!!! good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is sad, once again....but good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is one write that can really move the soul
This tells a life that is living in peace but one day
will prosper. I like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 4, 2010
Last Updated on May 14, 2010
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SarahCortland
SarahCortland

Owensboro, KY



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My name is Myspace Layouts. I love to Write poetry and I am currently working on one book. Sometimes I write short stories but Poetry is what i like to Stick to. Confidence Quotes .. more..

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