I have to because I do

the things I feel at times

I want to let go
I just want fall.
I want do be done,
TO end it all.

I hate all these feelings.
I hate all these fears.
I hate all this waiting.
crying these tears

I'd love to leave
I'd love to run
I'd love to forget
to stop and be done

I just can't find it in me
I just can't leave
I just wish I could go
to finally grieve

Though I have grow up
I have to stay
I have to realize
that there's nothing more to say.

Reviews

[Skelasoldier]

So many emotions within this piece, I would say it earns the rating in which I gave it. Excellent work, hope to see more of it
~Skela

[Sabbath_Nikole]

The way your wrote this, i rushed through it like a list, but i like it. Fast paced and frantic. Very interesting mode of escape beneath.

[AllyKinzz:)]

i love this piece. Great job.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a towering inferno of emotion. Great job.

[Senseless whatever]

Great write. It felt like you ended this one early, like you had more to say.

[The Water Queen]

You have such great talent that will ripen as you grow. Your poems flow nicely and the rhyming is great. Once agian another spetacular write.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Beautiful piece. truely wonderful :D i expect grea things out of you in the future. i am trueluy a great fan of your poems.