An un-explainable love

An un-explainable love

A Poem by SarahCortland
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i couldn't begin to explain 
nor could i understand
this love i feel 
crazy yet not out of hand.

your touch drives me insane
but your look does so much more
all my fears and pain fade
as you heal me to the core.

surely you must see it
for it lies in my eyes
the happiness you bring me
unlike so many guys.

your so inexplicable
i find myself at a loss for words
as my heart flutters quickly
as the wings of birds.

sometimes i just listen
as you breathe quietly in my ear
i wouldn't trade it for anything
even when your snoring i hear.

and those mornings when i wake
i live to see those smiling eyes
you would never know it
but its one reason my heart survives.

when we first made love
i felt a feeling of peace
i had never felt so loved
and the worry had ceased. 

but even that doesn't compare
to laying silently in your arms.
your eyes tell it all
its one of your many charms.

but through all of this
i could never begin to explain
how our love came so quick
and my heart i wouldn't contain. 

© 2011 SarahCortland


Author's Note

SarahCortland
for my chasema

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oops, sorry. had to write this second bit because i forgot to rate the first one and it wont let you just put in a number and submit. Oh no! you got to comment again. so hopefully, i'll remember the simple task of putting in a number to the box handily titled...rating.
ps... i know, i talk too much. i'll go now, promise.

pps. did i say that i liked this? :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Un-questionably beautiful write. I've tried to critique, honestly, but no.... carry on. Excellent job.

PS....just in case i wasnt clear, i quite like this :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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SarahCortland
SarahCortland

Owensboro, KY



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My name is Myspace Layouts. I love to Write poetry and I am currently working on one book. Sometimes I write short stories but Poetry is what i like to Stick to. Confidence Quotes .. more..

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