Change

Change

A Poem by Murtuza
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A poem for all of those who pursue to change themselves to being better

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Gone, are those weak thoughts.
Returned, has that fire within me.
Free, am I from those heavy rocks.
Pointless, has been my stupidity.


Up, is where I’ll be aiming.
Down, I will never creep.
Faith, will I be Keeping.


Change, is what I seek.

© 2011 Murtuza


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I love how you've structured it in a sort of question answer prose.
Very creative too the aspects you've managed to cover and how they've led to what you seek.
It had a very good flow to it and i loved how the short length managed to convey a powerful message. You got IT man. Start sharing them with me:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Perfect! All in a few rocking lines! Change is good, I can't be without it. Very good poem! loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Amen! All has been said.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short-but it spoke amazing volumes! This is a brief piece of Literary Art full of hope and the whole sense of 'moving forward'. Well done!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice! The lines were simple and meaningful. Beautiful piece of work here! :) 100/100!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy the image of letting go of the heavy rocks, free to fly free, to change.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is inspiring. so young and so much talent. keep up the good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing! I love the second verse. It flows so nicely. Change can be positive and aiming forward never backwards, up, never down, is always good :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Superb work .... inspirational and I love the ending .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you've structured it in a sort of question answer prose.
Very creative too the aspects you've managed to cover and how they've led to what you seek.
It had a very good flow to it and i loved how the short length managed to convey a powerful message. You got IT man. Start sharing them with me:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2011
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Tags: Change, spirit, persevere, work hard

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Murtuza
Murtuza

Chennai, India



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Hi all :) I love to write - be it poems, articles, stories and the like. Whatever I write mostly comes up from the spur of the moment and I don't really start off with a basic idea. I just write ba.. more..

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