It's Chris, Miss

It's Chris, Miss

A Poem by Murtuza



The presents sat beneath,
so delicately entwined.
A little face, lay in anxious wait
for the present she would find.

Before she would delve herself,
another small face drew close.
A smile, he warmly portrayed
as her cheeks grew pinkish-rose.

“It’s Chris, miss,” he said,
as he handed a modest gift.
Lily was pleasantly surprised
at his smiles, quick and swift.

Many Christmases did pass,
and the seeds of love did sow.
They always met at that very spot
underneath the mistletoe.

© 2011 Murtuza

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Dear Murtuza,

Oh, this is very nice. A simple story filled with love. These are the very best kind.

Greatly enjoyed for its openness, directness, and pureness of spirit. Highest marks!

Best regards,


Posted 8 Years Ago

Aw! This was so cute! I loved it! :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago

The innocence of first love - when the whole cosmos seems to conspire and the skies seem full with magic...

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write. i think it would be more awesome if you make it longer... i was kinda eager to know what happens to them after that..wee :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

D'aww cute poem! =)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 31, 2011
Last Updated on December 31, 2011
Tags: Christmas, Love, Young



Chennai, India

Hi all :) I love to write - be it poems, articles, stories and the like. Whatever I write mostly comes up from the spur of the moment and I don't really start off with a basic idea. I just write ba.. more..


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