Mistakes

Mistakes

A Poem by Huggy Bear
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Mistakes are caused by anger Regret sets in for making these mistakes You allow your mind with the What If

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I have caused many mistakes
Most mistakes were out of my reach
Misconceptions are caused by anger
Regret sets in for making these
faux pas

You allow your mind with the What If

Obsession over mistakes is a neglect within delusion
It is a deadly cycle that riddles life

Learn from these omissions 

You can live joyously
While avoiding the potholes of life
As long as you study your own gag reel

© 2010 Huggy Bear


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Nice underlying wisdom, but I think the presentation of the poem is just doesn't match. Instead of using "mistakes" over and over again, consider other synonyms to replace it. Some grammatical mistakes, but otherwise fair write. Stanzas would be a help as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


loved it. your a great poet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wise words. If we learn from our mistakes. We will become better. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Something is always learn. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 8, 2010
Last Updated on March 1, 2010
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Huggy Bear
Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY



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