Illusion of Friendship

Illusion of Friendship

A Poem by Huggy Bear

I was there for you I saved you from harm You used to call me brother You used to call me family I felt like I belonged in the world

I was there for you
I saved you from harm
You used to call me brother
You used to call me family
I felt like I belonged in the world

As time marched on
Your feelings changed
you make promises you never keep
You leave me hanging out late at night
When I call you
You tell me I am a nuisance

Soon the real truth comes out
You see me as weak
A person that does not deserve to be loved
You and your friends beat me for being a virgin
You spit in face and call me worthless

I am left to wonder home crying
So close to suicide
The foresight I had for life gets dimmer
I ask is this what friendship is
Is this what happens when put it on the line
I hope one day  I can find peace with others for a life time


© 2010 Huggy Bear

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What a sad poem; I pray no one actually went through this. If so thanks for the raw share. Peace

Posted 10 Years Ago

i love this poem...i like the way it tackles friendship at its journey, whether the relationship will grow stronger or just falter...anyways, this is a good poem:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Such raw emotion in this write and my heart cries out to the main character being mistreated. This is a Powerful write, keep up the good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

if only this weren't so true.

Posted 11 Years Ago

you relate the devastation of friendship betrayed in a deeply moving sincere manner~ truly affecting~

Posted 11 Years Ago

Extremely sad but touching and honest..extremely well written, Mustafa...what a poignant exploration of a friendship that turns out to be unreal...Phenomenal

Posted 11 Years Ago

Sadness but all is layered with truth.. very good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Very sincere words…

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was sad, but full of truth and honesty. I understand and relate. Nice write. Keep your head up, people can be harsh sometimes. Smile :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow such strong words and emotions excellent pice of writting i also like how it reflects real life situations which not many writters succsfully accomplish

Posted 11 Years Ago

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19 Reviews
Added on February 16, 2010
Last Updated on February 18, 2010
Tags: Illusion, Friendship, Pain


Huggy Bear
Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY

- I have such an innocence and purity that not a lot of people have - Have a heart that most people can only fake - My heart has led me to some dark regions of life. - My heart has also led me to s.. more..


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