A Poem by Huggy Bear

Kissing you is a treat. I eagerly anticipate the chance.


Kissing you is a treat.

I eagerly anticipate the chance.

When I kiss you

I kiss the part of you that loves

I kiss all the compliments you give

I kiss the I love you that escapes you

The taste from your lips is incredibly sweet.

It is addicting and intoxicating.

No matter how long we are together

Your kiss will remain an imprint on my mind body and lips

© 2010 Huggy Bear

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This is different from your usual style, but it still has the same mistakes. "I kiss the part of you that you love" instead of "loves" I think there is a lot of room to expand. Elaborate on each line, give me a little description. At least you have the space to. Please give a girl who hasn't kissed yet a vivid feel for the supposedly amazing sensation of kissing a boy she loves. Nice beginning, but needs a lot of work

Posted 12 Years Ago

A excellent poem. Those sweet kisses leave us with good memories for forever. Poem told a very good story. Ending was perfect.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Nice way to show how a kiss can penetrate the soul!

Posted 13 Years Ago

nice, really romantic, knowing women, they would certainly feel so too.
a good write, and enjoyable to read
now i noe what to read to my girlfriend:)))

Posted 13 Years Ago

wow this is extremely romantic. music to a woman's ...eyes?? lol well done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on March 21, 2010
Last Updated on March 21, 2010


Huggy Bear
Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY

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