Virginity

Virginity

A Poem by Huggy Bear
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Honesty about be a male virgin in this world

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I fear physical commitment
I imagine I will not be good
I might get laugh at by a girl I date
Many nights I said that I dont want sex
It works for a while
Life goes on
Then......

The sky of desire falls on me hard
My soul throbs with painful lust
I look around and see how sex is awesome
I feel left out
I am sad

Unworthy of explicit love
I am cursed
I could of lifted my curse
Yet they did not love me
To give away my innocence to those women
Would be an injustice on a grand scale
My life is drama and desire
It works till the next time the sky fall down.

© 2010 Huggy Bear




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Ian
I find this funny in way im not trying to offen you. You shouldn't worry so much just do it to a girl you truly care about. I cant really give an advice but good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


My God…..
Why do you think about sex……?
Society is wrong with regard to sex….
And it will be so forever…..
Because….human beings have a tendency to overcome sex and evolve in to the level of God…who is sexless…..
To have a right concept about sex…..
Read the books of Osho Rajaneesh…
But your words are truthful and sincere….
I like it….


Posted 13 Years Ago


I admire the innocence and openness in this poem. The feelings here, unfortunately, never go away! Overall I enjoyed reading this. I would suggest re-reading for spelling errors. An error in spelling or obvious grammar issues will control the feel and flow of the poem. I enjoyed reading from this point of view.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Mustafa, I understand this poem and where you are coming from. It must be very difficult to remain celibate in a world that is flouting sex so blatantly and making people feel they are somewhat odd if they choose to remain true to their beliefs and morality. You are a rarity, and I say that in a kind way and applaud you for your stance on this. Keep saving yourself until the right girl comes along and believe me you will be glad to give all you have to her. Wonderful write!

Take care my friend,

Helena :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 2, 2010
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Tags: Sex, Love, Fear, Innocence

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Huggy Bear

Astoria, NY



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