Emotional Prison

Emotions imprisoned

Within our mind is a prison
It houses the most dangerous of emotions
As you close your eyes you see a long hallway
On both sides you feel the tension with these emotions

The first emotional cell you encounter is sadness
The cell is damp with tears
The pool of tears leaks into the hallway
It touches your foot ever so delicately
Suddenly a tsunami of pain and depression washes over
You fall to your knees and cry hard

Through sheer will power you break free
You quickly backtrack against another cell
Rage flows thorough body
A red glow washes over your body
Anger has introduced yourself

You want leave this this madhouse that is your mind
At the end of the hall you see door
You try to run away form these insane emotions
As your hand reaches the door and you open it

You are shocked at what you see
You see yourself
Your mental representation points behind you
Slowly you turn your head
You see your emotions free from its bond
As they creep close you awake
Terror sweats down your face
No matter how much you run
No matter how much you oppress your emotions
They will always break free and let their presence be felt

Reviews

[Color of the Iris]

Wow, this was a great piece! I love how you explained the fear we feel when our negative emotions take over us like spirits. Uncontrollable, they sometimes can be. I've been in this state more than once, and I really relate to this piece! Good job, keep writing, my mental audience applauds you, and demands an encore.

[JENY]

MUstafaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….
Loved it soooooooooooooooo….much..
I say….you have an innate skill…
To become a psychotherapist….
You are a good reader of mind…human mind…
Imageries…you chose to describe the emotions are….
Very apt and clever too…
Liked it so much…

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job!

[deeps]

You are shocked at what you see
You see yourself
Your mental representation points behind you
Slowly you turn your head

Love this part of this write, Some peple just don't see when they are
running that they can not out rum themsleves. Wonderful write here.