the promised land

the promised land

A Story by outlaw

the land i want to go to


when i was a young boy

i felt in love with a country

so far away but i want to live there

over ages i kinda hate my country where i lived

and the promised land is still in my thoughts

but i know i never gonna get there

so now i just dreaming about it

and forget my country

and imagine

to be there

and be happy


but then i stop dreaming

and i realise me

im stuck in this part of the world


so now you reading this

and think what a weird end

i think every one is dreaming about a place where it is just perfect

© 2010 outlaw

Author's Note

dont blame me
im just a guy

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haha nice write. sounds like a song you made up or something. yep we all gotta just get happy cause a lot of the time we just have to make best of the worst of ourselves

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alblasserdam, zuid holland, Netherlands

im a guy a boy know nothing lives in his own world care about nothing except for her but she lives in a whole other world more..

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