I Miss You

um... nothing major. Just stareted writing about an ex-boyfriend of mine. Let me know what you think!! Critism is welcome!

You broke my heart in two,

Now I can barely breathe.

I yearn to tell you how much it hurts,

To see you talk to them,

But it does not matter.

For we are no longer together,

My words would just go through yours ears,

Not really understanding the meaning of them.

 

You don’t talk to me anymore,

And I guess that’s to be expected,

But I just can’t handle this.

I miss you. I miss you every day

And there is nothing I can do about it now.

 

I heard that you have a new girlfriend.

Her name is Flor, and I can’t believe my ears.

My heart is no longer there since that day

And now every time I see you

I just cry because you broke my heart

And I no longer have it.

 

 

Author's Note

Let me know of any ways to improve it!
Thanks!

Reviews

[Wildecat]

I thought you did a great job writing this poem, sad when you breakup and then have to see that person with someone else. Nice write.