Doomed

We didn't ask to be left this way
this is our inheritance, our burden 
other peoples rash, inconsiderate nature 
made us who we have become
every action affects the future
never changes the past
its the one truth about this world
we were doomed from the start

Reviews

[EyeM_E]

Your honesty speaks clearly throughout.

[CookieMonster♥&h..]

amazing peom i lyk it

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is amazing!
I love how you make your point clear,
Short and straight to the point, great poem :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, very dark and intense... an amazing poem

[Brad]

there is so much truth in this it is bursting with relavance

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Amazing work man!
Short and sweet, just how good poetry should be