Attention

Attention

A Poem by Via

I'm fighting for your attention
Can't you see?
Blatantly waving hands in your face
Shoving compliments into your brain
Clapping my hands to the beat of your voice
Trying to get your attention!
Please see me!

I'm walking away
Cant you see?
Face drooping of hopelessness
Shoulders shlumping at the thought of you
Feet sliding on the floor
Won't pick them up
I'm walking away
You've lost me

© 2013 Via


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What a great piece. I love the way this piece builds from the intensity of trying to gain attention, winding down to when you just admit defeat. Well done. Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Via

11 Years Ago

Oh wow thank you so much!

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Added on April 9, 2013
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Tags: love, loveless, kiss, of, death, sad, sadness, depression, lovely, lonely, lonliness, romance, walking, away, walk, run, lost, never, found

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Via
Via

Huntsville, AL



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