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The Love From Within

The Love From Within

A Poem by SW..if..TY
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A love poem. Havent done one of these in a couple years cuz ive had some really bad relationship issues during that time. hope you enjoy! Critique! :)

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I've gazed into her eyes, seen the whole world

Seen pretty blue oceans, like my love unfurled

I've seen her at her lowest point possible

Analyzing everything, so methodical

Beautiful flowing brown hair

I can't help but to stop and stare

She's so nonchalant, acting like she don't care

But I know her like a tree in fall, so bare

I've thought about her day in and day out

Her love has me flying up into the clouds

Can't believe shes mine

Shes like platinum or gold

So rare and so fine

Im a little bit rusty with my love poetry

Spend the rest of my life with you, solely

So I give you my heart and all my love

Cuz you make my heart sing like the coo of a dove

 

© 2013 SW..if..TY


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SW..if..TY
My first "Love" poem in a couple years!

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Lovely...Just a gorgeous poem....

Posted 6 Years Ago


SW..if..TY

6 Years Ago

Thank you! :) I question my love poem writing just because its been a few years since I wrote them
Pretty_as_a_Poet

6 Years Ago

well any signs of decay in your poetic talent has certainly eluded me!
SW..if..TY

6 Years Ago

well thank you! I'll keep on keepin' on!
Aww. To know her like a tree that's bare. Beautiful. This is contrary to what I just posted.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SW..if..TY

6 Years Ago

thank you! and I'll have to check out what you just wrote then! haha
Love poems are something I have always sucked at so I'm not the best person to review this, but I really like it, there is care and emotion in the words, whoever she is should feel cherished :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SW..if..TY

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Ya I used to write them all day, because I was in love with beautiful gal a cou.. read more
Shannen Forrester

6 Years Ago

Well you definitely can :) any girl would love to get this.
SW..if..TY

6 Years Ago

well thank you! im definitely going to save this to my collection then! :)

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Added on February 28, 2013
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Tags: Love, Relationships, Reality, Rap, HipHop, Poetry, Flow, Rhyme, Life, MusicIsLife, Relatable, MentalDrive

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SW..if..TY
SW..if..TY

Charlotte, NC



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I am brutally honest thinker, If something crosses my mind, chances are im going to say it, or write it down, whether its a rhyme, or a random thought on a random topic. I love poetry and song writing.. more..

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