Clearly the World Will Stop For You

This is a poem that I wrote for my first love.

Clearly the world will stop for you

lovely doesn’t begin to describe your elegant beauty

air  flows through your gleaming hair in the rising sun

resting lightly on your shoulders your

acoustic voice sings out to me and floats me into your soft reassuring arms

 

I want to be the lucky man to hold your hand

 

love has never been so true  between anyone else since the

origin of time itself

voices hum to me praising you as the one who will

envelope me with a passionate embrace that will be spoken of for centuries to come

 

you are the only one that can set smiles on my face for days you are the only one who can

offer me a life-time guaranteed bag filled with Laughter and Fond Memories

untangle me from reality and fly me away to a magical land where we will be alone

 

so that I can say

 

I love you

 

Author's Note

What did you think of my word choice?

Reviews

[Trey Jakosalem]

Word choice, to me, is simple yet efficient.
Also, this connects with me during my life right now.
Thank you for touching my soul.

[Kaylee]

The title captured my attention right away. My favorite verse of this was "envelope me with a passionate embrace that will be spoken of for centuries to come" Leaves the reader with anticipation and asking will there be more? Perhaps we will get to see this love story unfold. Lovely work.

[Magnus]

I believe the word choice was powerful in its own right, it brought back memories to me and when writing does that its powerful. The word choice strung together to reveal the passion and love you felt.

[Anonymous Aspects]

I enjoyed your passionate and expressive word choice. You incorporated a well developed, attention grabbing title👍🏼. You set the bar higher for love poems.

[HeatherWoodard]

Amaaazing! That girl would be very lucky to have you

[Vera Fnk]

I really like it :) Especially the enjambments :)

[www]

I absolutely love, hold on, LOVE the title.
Your word choice was wimsical. I felt as if the words were floating in the air and going wherever this lucky person was.
Lovedddd the title!

[ATOMLaw]

Would you allow me to Use these words

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

it made me cry your wo5rd choice was perfect if i was you i would not change a thing