Spring

Spring

A Poem by Ibreez Shabkhez

Spring 
What doth thou bring,
Merry birds upon thy wing
What sweet melodies they shall sing!

All winter were the daffodils 
Crushed by Nature's power
But once more they shall tower
Upon the Highland Hills

Upon a Glorious April Day,
The children come out to play.
The redbreast finds his mate
And all is ever so gay.

© 2011 Ibreez Shabkhez


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I love it. Very good. Alsalamo Aleikum.

Posted 2 Years Ago


You have explained about spring nicely I liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ibreez Shabkhez

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much. have a lovely weekend.
Lovely tribute to spring. Playful...I felt like Tigger bouncing around singing it as I read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ibreez Shabkhez

8 Years Ago

Have you been watching winnie the pooh?
Bats In The Belfry

8 Years Ago

I have a deep connection to Winnie the Pooh...lol
There is such a beautiful form and flow in your words. You breathe hope in the strength and joy of spring.

Posted 9 Years Ago


My favorite tulip was smitten
by savage winter t'was bitten
hence, this poem was written

Posted 9 Years Ago


great write. love the style.

Posted 10 Years Ago


As Chels said, this is written in an older style, and I love it! Because of that it has a certain charm and flow to it. Not a lot of people write in this style anymore, so to do this successfully is really great, my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice poem, you write in an older style, which is cool. You don't really see it much!
You created a really nice picture of the flurry of spring! I especially liked the line about daffodils!
Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a sweet and cheerful way to greet the season spring.
Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can't wait till spring. I'm snowed in here! Glorious lines!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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