Spring

Spring

A Poem by Ibreez Shabkhez

Spring 
What doth thou bring,
Merry birds upon thy wing
What sweet melodies they shall sing!

All winter were the daffodils 
Crushed by Nature's power
But once more they shall tower
Upon the Highland Hills

Upon a Glorious April Day,
The children come out to play.
The redbreast finds his mate
And all is ever so gay.

© 2011 Ibreez Shabkhez


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awsome

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great flow!nice,concise and simple...great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


well spoken,good choices,good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha aw. So short, but so sweet. It gets me excited for spring.... it actually made me crack a smile. =]

F**k winter.

Posted 13 Years Ago


that is really cool liked the flow of words two thumbs up def.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the ode throwback when a master could wake up, open his window and take in a smell of spring and create a vision for it...then go back to bed or get blown..Ho Ho

Good on ya

Posted 13 Years Ago


My favorite tulip was smitten
by savage winter t'was bitten
hence, this poem was written


Posted 13 Years Ago


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Posted 13 Years Ago


Thanks guys...is this better than soul less's poems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ibreez Shabkhez
Ibreez Shabkhez

Nakushita, Kansuki



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