Before I die

it's not a big list, and it is not everything that i wanna do in life...but it's a part of it :)

I make a list

Whenever I cry

Of all the things I want to do

Before I die

It’s not too long

It doesn’t have to be

Because I don’t know

What I will live to see

Goals, experiences

I don’t want to miss…

So I wrote them down

& it goes something like this:

Prove that I can fly

Do a stupid dare

Celebrate new years

Right in time square

Crowd surf at a concert

Make my wishes come true

Ask   a guy to dance

Give my crush a clue

Forgive,

Someone whom doesn’t deserve me (T)

Apologize,

To someone for all I put them through (Myself)

See the order in the chaos

See the good in the bad

See the light in the darkness

See happiness in what makes me sad

Win a championship

Make history,

So future generations

Will learn about my story

We only live once

Like all those hipsters say,

Why not take their advice

For just one day?!

 

 

Author's Note

I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Good Bucket list But I made mine so long I don't have time to die so with Jesus on my side he got my Back and I'm Going to live forever with him in Heaven where my bucket list continues with every passing day visit my parents who have gone before me and all the generations before me I haven't been introduced too Will have a all day picnic in haven planing a family reunion.

[Raj]

very good poem and you described it really nicely.

[Brave girl]

thank you for your kind words :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow .. so beautiful poem .. so thoughtful with your words. I`m surprised to read your wonderful words, you`ve a lovely talent to write such beautiful pieces .. I like this write! ;)

[Brave girl]

thank you;i'm glad u like it =D

[Wórdsmíth]

Your welcome, friend, I always love reading your stuffs .. xoxo ;)

[Brave girl]

......... :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Hey .. how was your day? (Mind If may I ask?) ;)

[Brave girl]

it's been great;you??
thanks for asking btw!

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah .. mine was also great .. thanks. Hey, i`ve written a new write called "Hallucination" .. you can check it out if you want to and leave some of your awesome words in the review ;) That`s a big write .. and I think .. you wanted to read some of my big stuffs too.. didn`t you?? Ha!

[Brave girl]

yep that's true,i'll sure check it out later on :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh sounds awesome ;) Thanks, friend .. xoxo

[Brave girl]

welcome :)

[K.J. Bryen]

A nice modern poem, with a positive message that says you only live once. Nicely done :)

[Brave girl]

thank you for a sweet review;i appreciate it :)

[Rahul]

I've also made on write on the same tittle and i think you one's great, you're going very well, write more, i'f love to read your nice writes.

[Brave girl]

thanks so much

[Norma Gonzalez]

however in the previous poems u might want to choice other word choice if you want ur fans to learn a different side of u. Too many Cry, Die, See on all or ur poems will just make the readers think u ran out of ideas.

[Norma Gonzalez]

GREAT BUCKET LIST.......I will follow it too :D

[KAin]

Positive message, positive poetry. Think we all have our own little lists don't we?
This was a nice little personal piece, done very well.
Keep up the good work!

[Brave girl]

thanks for the nice review and i am very glad that you liked it

[Luke Rawlings]

That was amazing, the best one I have read by you. It felt truly inspired and from within your heart. A really, really good read. Bravo Brave Girl, bravo.

[Brave girl]

thank you Luke'light giving' ;)

[Alex Falkner]

I enoyed this piece, it's well thought out, well written and a great message in your words while letting the reader get to know you a little.
Great write.

Tammy.

[Brave girl]

thank you for the sweet review and i am so glad that you enjoyed reading it :)