I am invincible

I am invincible

A Poem by Brave girl
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No i really feel that way:)

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What an ugly feeling to be weak
with fear i was playing hide and seek...
But the decision is in my hand 
wether i sit or stand
wether i keep running
or stop hiding...

I chose to fight
the past had hurt me a lot,
 it's time to put the last dot!
No more tears,
those tears have made me strong
but keeping on crying is wrong;
I will embrasse the fact 
that it's all just a memory from the past
because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind
and a note that you might find:
"I AM INVINCIBLE"

© 2013 Brave girl


Author's Note

Brave girl
well it's abit of a revealing of the true me, ihope the you will like it :)

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Awesome poem.... I love that you wrote words straight from your heart that reflect the true you :) Good work

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much
A personal conviction comes through so clearly to push aside the obstacles of life.. great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review... :D
This is so strong, courageous, inspiring and filled with confidence.
Not everyone has this kind of strength, I know I don't. I admire you for that.
Great piece :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Aaawww thank you sooo much.. it has been tough for me to get to that point..but im glad that i did :.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Im glad that you did to, its great really.
Your welcome :)
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

........... =D
i really like it..it has great deal of hope for frustrated feeling ones..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you so much for the review
Very nice! And good to know you better. You sound strong here!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you very much!! i appreciate it
Wonderful piece of poetry. Very well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I did not only liked it but i loved it.. "dwell not in the past, have no doubts about future,but live in the presence." ;) This world is a battlefield and we all fighters in it.. I am inspired.. Keep writing friend

~Sophy

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me! =D
Sophy Freebirds

6 Years Ago

De nada brave girl!! Stay strong ;)

~Sophy
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Gracias me nueva amiga =D
I like this a lot.....it's hard to put things in the past and move forward sometimes. I am a firm believer in what doesn't kill us makes us stronger. Good write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brave girl

6 Years Ago

yes i love that saying too! and thanks for a nice review Ryan =)
Oh how I love this piece! The title speaks for itself.

I will embrasse the fact
that it's all just a memory from the past
because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind
and a note that you might find:
"I AM INVINCIBLE"

This lines are so powerful!
Great piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you so much,i'm glad you liked it =D that made me so happy
Natalie Dieudonne

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Very painful at starting but seemed very impressive in last .. in an ending. Very inspiration poem for healing the broken hearts.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

okey i sure will :)
Wórdsmíth

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much. You`re far kind ;)
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thanks for that :)

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