Will you?

Will you?

A Poem by Brave girl
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so many question going on my head and i think this the only way i can express a few of them,i hope you enjoy it

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Will you remember me when I'm gone?
Will you wake up praying for me at dawn?
Will you remember me,
when my soul into my body will never be?
Will you miss me,
when the reason why you can't even see?
Will you love me the same way,
when I won't be there for you day by day?
Will you remember me??
Will you remember ,
how hard it was to feed my soul?
Or complain about how hard it was to fill that hole?
would you dare?
Oh do you ever care?!

© 2014 Brave girl


Author's Note

Brave girl
I hope you'll like it, and i admire your criticism :)

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It's sad that you don't really appreciate what you have until it's gone or taken away from you, whatever it is. It's even worse feeling being the person that isn't appreciated. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I took from it. There's raw feeling in this, it gives it a real authentic feel, likes it more specific that just a vague thought, as if it's directed towards someone real. Making this real.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you for ur nice review =)



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I love this because I too find myself asking these questions and you were able i form these questions into a beautiful art form of poetry

Posted 3 Years Ago


Most people would say they care with a God fearing love inside the tugs at our hearts with sentimental pride For you I will remember the times reading your poetry and getting to know your soul what you write from the heart guided by God's Love expressed in words God will for your spilling out of your harmony to humanity to visit What deeply you have hidden and what you will only express to the world in your scribbles and poems of love and respect of Friends and family.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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So many questions.. when we are in love, we do wish the feeling is mutual, that the other hurts as much, wants as much, loves as much.
lovely! :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


Brave girl

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the review =D
that was really good :) u were able to talk about questions that many people ask themselves everyday :) great job :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Brave girl

5 Years Ago

So* lol typo
Justin

5 Years Ago

your welcome :) :) :) it is funny :P
Brave girl

5 Years Ago

Yep ........^-^
Lovely write :) ITs amazing how the mind questions one particular phenomenon such as love... you've brought out so many layers to it. great work :) cheers

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear writer
Nice poems. You should check out the ones I wrote.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Okey i will do when i have the chance =D
Double T

6 Years Ago

Thanks for responding :)
Hi dear interesting concept here so nice to see you again

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review... =D
This was very deep, soulful, heartfelt and meaningful.
So so many unanswered questions, running through your head huh.
This was a great emotion filled piece, written from your heart
Great write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Thank u so much for the review
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

Anytime :)
Nicely done, so cute thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A lost love, pining for another chance. Well-paced. Nicely written. I look forward reading more of your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, and i'd be glad to see other reviews =D
Paper Forks

6 Years Ago

I'd be delighted if you could do the same.
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

That would be my pleasure

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