Will you?

Will you?

A Poem by Brave girl
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so many question going on my head and i think this the only way i can express a few of them,i hope you enjoy it

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Will you remember me when I'm gone?
Will you wake up praying for me at dawn?
Will you remember me,
when my soul into my body will never be?
Will you miss me,
when the reason why you can't even see?
Will you love me the same way,
when I won't be there for you day by day?
Will you remember me??
Will you remember ,
how hard it was to feed my soul?
Or complain about how hard it was to fill that hole?
would you dare?
Oh do you ever care?!

© 2014 Brave girl


Author's Note

Brave girl
I hope you'll like it, and i admire your criticism :)

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It's sad that you don't really appreciate what you have until it's gone or taken away from you, whatever it is. It's even worse feeling being the person that isn't appreciated. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I took from it. There's raw feeling in this, it gives it a real authentic feel, likes it more specific that just a vague thought, as if it's directed towards someone real. Making this real.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you for ur nice review =)



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It's sad that you don't really appreciate what you have until it's gone or taken away from you, whatever it is. It's even worse feeling being the person that isn't appreciated. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I took from it. There's raw feeling in this, it gives it a real authentic feel, likes it more specific that just a vague thought, as if it's directed towards someone real. Making this real.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you for ur nice review =)
very nicely penned..it really reflects the worries of lovers regarding true feelings of love..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

yes exactly! thank you for reading =D
Very heartfelt piece here. We all want to know we are wanted and feel like we mean something. No matter how you think of yourself you're always loved by someone. Even if its one person. Keep your head up in turmoil.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you so much! it means alot =D
Ahh the uncertainity of whether or not always lingers in our minds.. this write is quite relateable and the rhetorical questions asked emphasize how importance his remembrance is to you.. An intense write girl :)

~Sophy

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you for a constructive review! thanks it means a lot to me
This was very intimate for me, beautifully written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you so much,i'm glad u liked it :)
This is well written, but really sad to read! 0(

A very identifiable write for most of us.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

yeah it's much better...haha that's why i can't write anymore,lol!
Blogger

6 Years Ago

You should write more! Indeed.
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

............=)
This sounds like song lyrics......is it? It could be i suspect.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

okey well thank you for the stopping by,and reading my poem :)
Blogger

6 Years Ago

It was my pleasure. I could almost hear music while reading it.
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

well that's great =D
Many wandering questions, it seems here, for and to reach the one, you wrote it for...
Intense, and heartfelt. I hope he does remember, I do hope because you are a sweet girl.

- Elisa

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

aww thank you so much Elisa, it means the world to me what you said =D
-Nada

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome Nada :) :)
Saddening in many ways...insightful in many others, pleased to meet you Brave Girl :) x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

aww thank you soo much for the review, it means a lot
the writing style is simply awesome n the way u put questions i really like it, I can relate too

Posted 6 Years Ago


Brave girl

6 Years Ago

thank you for a such great review :) i appreciate it
Eve Ola

6 Years Ago

your welcome :)
Brave girl

6 Years Ago

................:)

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