A Poem by masquerade13

Enjoy life, because there's a select few of us who are forever in a cycle of misfortune and death.

Weeping willows,
clouded nights,
enclosed with,
shingling lights.
Moaning angels,
hazy sights,
together now,
undo the right,
undo the right.
What right?
Death behold me,
I see no right.
Life befriend me,
I see no right.
Hope buffer me,
I see some right.
Plea for me to swallow the key.
I'll swallow the key that binds you to me.
Go away.
I hate you.
Come back.
I need you.
Go away.
I love you.
Come back.
I see you.
Never ask me to swallow the key that binds you to me.
Crimson blood all that remains because you asked me to swallow the key.

© 2012 masquerade13

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This poem is nice, but I think you need to capitalize every beginnings of your sentences. Please keep writing, I will be looking forward to read more of your writings! Have a good day!
Enjoy your life, and probably listening to some music as you write (maybe you already do?)!
See you soon!

Miya Huang

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 22, 2012
Last Updated on October 22, 2012
Tags: death, dead, rebel, sad, depressing, gloomy, hoping, longing, linger, love, romance, life, wishing



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There's not a whole lot to tell about me you see.. I am pretty simple though writing is my life. No, I do not mean I'm sitting at my computer all day writing... It's just writing is the only way for m.. more..


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