betrayal.

betrayal.

A Poem by alltheloveabove
"

when someone you really cared about toys with your feelings and pretends like nothing happened. You've broken everything we had.

"

Betrayal. Its pit cold. Its being in the arms of one you trusted the most, but being suddenly thrown into an endless pit of thorns and wild animals that will hack away at your trust, faith and respect until there is nothing left but your empty, cold stare.

© 2012 alltheloveabove


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I really like this. Simple, yes, but completely relatable. I can tell that this came directly from your heart. I hope whatever inspired this little piece is taken care of, and if not the process to claim out of this "endless pit" is tough, but your life will change for the better along the way!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alltheloveabove

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. It's tough, but you know.. You've got to get rid of the weeds to let the flower.. read more
Adam Amanse

8 Years Ago

Definitely! It's when we focus too much on the weeds, though, that we forget that we've been standin.. read more
alltheloveabove

8 Years Ago

Amen. and thank you. :)



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Good job. Completely from the heart. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


alltheloveabove

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
I really like this. Simple, yes, but completely relatable. I can tell that this came directly from your heart. I hope whatever inspired this little piece is taken care of, and if not the process to claim out of this "endless pit" is tough, but your life will change for the better along the way!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alltheloveabove

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. It's tough, but you know.. You've got to get rid of the weeds to let the flower.. read more
Adam Amanse

8 Years Ago

Definitely! It's when we focus too much on the weeds, though, that we forget that we've been standin.. read more
alltheloveabove

8 Years Ago

Amen. and thank you. :)

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Geneva, Switzerland



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Hi everyone :) My name is Jina Kim and I am more of a spontaneous writer, scribbling, or rather typing away furiously until I click 'submit.' Thank you for the reads and the reviews, it's highly app.. more..

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