Did you forget?

Did you forget?

A Poem by alltheloveabove
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A poem written together by me and my friend, Ash ☼

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Life in the views of a two teenage girls - 

Alarm clock ringing into a crescendo, the day begins
Checks the phone, nothing is in.
Did you forget?

Pretty, shined shoes, cute autumn dress
Mascara ready, must impress

Did you forget?

Stretched smile, books sunken in the bag
I search for you amongst the nodding heads
But all of a sudden, hope is dead.

I'm ready, I'm waiting 
You're late.
My dress crinkles, my lipstick fades
Black streams down underneath my shades
My smiles gone, the feelings back,
you promised.

You told me endless stories, saturated in the syrup of happiness
Filled me with youthful promises.

You said forever-- 


did you forget? •

© 2012 alltheloveabove


Author's Note

alltheloveabove
This was an attempt at a poem with my friend Ash during my school study hall :)

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I tried to put 100000000 in the rating bow but it wouldn't let me. I loved this poem. It literally brought tears to my eyes. I'm very picky when it comes to poetry but I really liked this one. c:

Posted 8 Years Ago


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alltheloveabove

8 Years Ago

THANK YOU SO MUCH :') alalalallalaa ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Emily

8 Years Ago

Aww. You're welcome.

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Added on September 26, 2012
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Tags: teenage life, love, abandonment, depression, dress, mascara, shoes, girls, hope, death

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alltheloveabove
alltheloveabove

Geneva, Switzerland



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Hi everyone :) My name is Jina Kim and I am more of a spontaneous writer, scribbling, or rather typing away furiously until I click 'submit.' Thank you for the reads and the reviews, it's highly app.. more..

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