Eternity Found

Eternity Found

A Poem by Nancy Lee Shrader
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10/40 Haiku String

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Eternity Found

 

Desolate moments

Birds flying helter skelter

On gray face he crawled

 

 

Above planes flying

Outer darkness surrounding

Trough becomes a grave

 

 

Ocean running red

With the blood of lost comrades

With fishes they sleep

 

 

Longevity gone

Prolonged durability

Eternity found

 

 

© 2010 Nancy Lee Shrader


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Very nice..I am not into this type of wwriting..my mind I guess thinks in longer terms.Nice ..I like it..Kathie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautifully done Nancy. Thank you for submitting this to Tovli's contest. I am finishing off this contest for her, not sure where Tovli is! I think she has flown the coop! lol

Helena :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Lovely Nancy!!! my fave was the last verse. This is a really great Haiku!

Posted 8 Years Ago


very nice, Nancy. One of your best poems. tovli

Posted 8 Years Ago


"on grey face he crawled" I think that this is a monumental capture there, along with the whole poem which places us face to face with the anxiety and profundity of Being-towards-death.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Nancy Lee Shrader
Nancy Lee Shrader

Beckley, WV



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Nancy Lee Shrader resides in Beckley, West Virginia. She is author of three books IS IT NOW? The End of Days! IS HE MESSIAH? Messianic Prophecies Revealed! And The Curse of Mayweather House Nancy Lee .. more..

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