Eternity Found

Eternity Found

A Poem by Nancy Lee Shrader

10/40 Haiku String


Eternity Found


Desolate moments

Birds flying helter skelter

On gray face he crawled



Above planes flying

Outer darkness surrounding

Trough becomes a grave



Ocean running red

With the blood of lost comrades

With fishes they sleep



Longevity gone

Prolonged durability

Eternity found



© 2010 Nancy Lee Shrader

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Very nice..I am not into this type of mind I guess thinks in longer terms.Nice ..I like it..Kathie

Posted 8 Years Ago

Beautifully done Nancy. Thank you for submitting this to Tovli's contest. I am finishing off this contest for her, not sure where Tovli is! I think she has flown the coop! lol

Helena :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very nice...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Lovely Nancy!!! my fave was the last verse. This is a really great Haiku!

Posted 9 Years Ago

very nice, Nancy. One of your best poems. tovli

Posted 10 Years Ago

"on grey face he crawled" I think that this is a monumental capture there, along with the whole poem which places us face to face with the anxiety and profundity of Being-towards-death.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on December 1, 2010
Last Updated on December 2, 2010


Nancy Lee Shrader
Nancy Lee Shrader

Beckley, WV

Nancy Lee Shrader resides in Beckley, West Virginia. She is author of three books IS IT NOW? The End of Days! IS HE MESSIAH? Messianic Prophecies Revealed! And The Curse of Mayweather House Nancy Lee .. more..


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