Valentine Bats

Valentine Bats

 

Bats in the belfry

They fly on Valentine’s Day

It’s love at first bite

 

 

Reviews

[Katelyn]

haha this is such a cute poem! :) Great job!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Lovely writing!
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!

[charlotte talley]

nancy this is cute love at first bite was a comedy movie. yea about a vampire and a beauty.

[-abc-]

LOL---love at first bite---- cute one----you've not marked it any particular genre, but couldn't help notice you've used 5-7-5 syllables.

[Tammy]

Too cute..

[Shellie]

so simple and lovely!!!xxx

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Good thought . I loved the lines. After a very long gap I logged on to writerscafe. with best wishes.

[Austin Smith]

The belfry was a perfect choice for the bats to watch their "prey"! This was exceptionally remarkable. Nice job!