SWICK: The Gates Of Weeping VOL 5

SWICK: The Gates Of Weeping VOL 5

A Poem by Nicaushio Yamaki

SWICK

The Gates of Weeping VOL 5

 

1.    Endurance


as we go together to

Eternity astray where

Nothing was leading

 In falling light above

 

 

Darkness many that cries

 Among the skies as

 Hope falls within

 

 

 Suffering as though a

 Last call is for death

Decaying in dismay



Conqueror’s that consumes

 Thou open squeals of

 Terror when the dawn

 

 Comes fragile nights ashore

 Through the dawn of

 Might thrives corpse

 Comes to life without a soul to hold


as thou endurance comes astray

 Thou people neglect

 Thou living hope

to with tone their only

 Deaths sovereign in depts.

 Of wickedness as thou

 Sins come up on thee



the lost will never for come

 The wicked as though

 Darkness falls so shall

 

 Thy weeping as risen spirit

 Of life comes restores

 Thy cries with holiness

 Thou souls will be departed away

Burdens of cries death lies beyond weeping


the darken souls she be

Punished to conceive dusk

 Of their own pits

Of evilness as it pulls

A stronghold within

 Every soul of light


2. Guiltless Blood


Like a feather leaping across the skies sorrows

 Of the bloody skies falling

Of rain as thou sun falls

 Through the shadows

Of the evil night light of one

Glides through the mist

 Of the cloudy darken skies


Awaked of many souls for

 Salvation torn in dismay

 Rather shine for vengeance

 Than eternal life in every

Path hearts dwells in

 

Swarm to every ear comes to

Silence in the entire world

Suffers through its on terror

 In thy eye of a fool who

 Never tells the lies these

 Stumbles or greatest horrors in numbers

 Of death crowds to dusky vengeance


as the darkness over rules the light

 Ashore from the mystical ashes
Taking hold of the pieces as

 It scatters within every

Fall troubles another day for a

 Singing hymn to gasp thy soul



Thy forgotten blood cries

For thee on the ground for

 Mercy soul adjusted to the

 Last crushing to the blood

 Flowing with sorrow

Never have I seen in denial

 

 Thou forsake a terror cry

Of sadness at the wicked

Tones of ashes comes more

 Sorrows in time or risen

 

They love for hate never is supreme

 Can never be as one forever



3. Darken shadow


from the grass lurks in the

 Darken scales forming

 More sacred waste in meadow while u travels

 Among your path containing your life.


As the shadow runs more to spare

 No awakes for where it leaps
down in the depths of thy beating

 Harrows unjust regains again





4.
A fatal heart


like a crushing stone that washes away with thou

 Own torn shreds with none consumes to fowling

 Rusted toss of ord when the settle flows ahead more

 Duskish to share as the darkness devoured the nature of sin.


Of the dead become to life

 Shall fall before the righteous

like a picture of what never

 Was regent image to seize

the order thou art ruler

 As walked cometh to


as thou image turns to tears awakes

 Thou weeping gates of eternal doom
Conversions tears away from thee


Scorns or flows from the skies return to

The unloving sorrow illusion never recasts
as in the Zion of wars as though run

 Into terror yet have not noticed

Single steps stop a path to everlasting falls.
A woman full of light and just as she walks through

 The darken path, of many sorrows, among thy

 False hearts contains

 

Lots of shares with thrones

 Of righteous come away from sin more

 Sulfur uncomments terror raising concisions.


To death raises a new comer as

Rebirth recalls thy sleeping sorrows

 

 

© 2010 Nicaushio Yamaki


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i half expected this to be another of your albums, so i was quite pleasantly surprised to read this. i think you've done a real nice job with this one, and your words are very mystical and that brings your work a very unique quality.
One thing though, i am quite a stickler for spelling and grammar. i noticed you wrote:
"A women full of light..."
it should be "woman" if it's just one woman, or if you're talking about many women then "she" should be changed to "they". sounds very anal but like i said, i am quite a stickler for these things.
anyway, awesome work man,

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i half expected this to be another of your albums, so i was quite pleasantly surprised to read this. i think you've done a real nice job with this one, and your words are very mystical and that brings your work a very unique quality.
One thing though, i am quite a stickler for spelling and grammar. i noticed you wrote:
"A women full of light..."
it should be "woman" if it's just one woman, or if you're talking about many women then "she" should be changed to "they". sounds very anal but like i said, i am quite a stickler for these things.
anyway, awesome work man,

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AWESOME STORY!! I loved it!

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good job keep it up it is a truly fantastic story

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Very good set up

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the set-up and the story. Create chapters to make the flow more easy for the reader. This chapter is powerful. Remind me of a mark Twain poem. A outstanding chapter.
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Haha i just realised that you used smaller writing. and yeahh....your writing can be a bit bland after reading so much about darkness. so try making it different somehow and try to make it interesting so that people will want to read it.

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Excellent write.

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