when it comes

she walks along the corridor

thinking if it would ever end

she thinks again and again

she think that something it coming

 

she runs but nothing there

she run down and down

she thinks that she is going to die

she feels that it is coming

 

she feels for the door

but it feels like it is going back

she can not grab it

then she screams

 

 

 

Author's Note

sorry for grammar and spelling
but tells us what you think

Reviews

[angel gone bad]

yea i will try and change it for next time thanks any way

[Dev]

she think that something it coming (she thinks that something is coming)
she runs but nothing there (but nothing's there)
she run down and down (runs)

well this is intriguing. I would like to know more about what is terrorizing her.