when it comes

when it comes

A Poem by angel gone bad

she walks along the corridor

thinking if it would ever end

she thinks again and again

she think that something it coming


she runs but nothing there

she run down and down

she thinks that she is going to die

she feels that it is coming


she feels for the door

but it feels like it is going back

she can not grab it

then she screams




© 2010 angel gone bad

Author's Note

angel gone bad
sorry for grammar and spelling
but tells us what you think

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yea i will try and change it for next time thanks any way

Posted 9 Years Ago

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she think that something it coming (she thinks that something is coming)
she runs but nothing there (but nothing's there)
she run down and down (runs)

well this is intriguing. I would like to know more about what is terrorizing her.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on May 18, 2010
Last Updated on May 18, 2010


angel gone bad
angel gone bad

peterborough, United Kingdom

Hello there my name is Natalie i like to write and think of a lot of different things. I thought that i would join this becuase i thought that this would be something good to put my writting on also s.. more..