Unbearable

welp. please read and enjoy!

I

Have everything,

But I 

Have nothing.

How to love 

or 

How to be loved. 

I 

Never understood. 

Cold and unbearable. 

I am 

So Empty. 

It is unbearable.

Author's Note

please read and enjoy! sorry if i overlooked some mistakes, please ignore that :-)

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

It is lovely poem on the real state of mind and heart in which one feels a kind of uneasiness. The other features of the poem is that you convey your thought in very short and simple language. Well written. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Best
Szhzia

[Natehy]

thank you so much :-)

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome. :-)

[sinNsincerity]

Not empty when you got us...

[Planet x]

I did enjoy it ,
its normal feeling of confusion , we all love the feeling of love unfortunately , not always achieved

[Harley Quinn]

This is wonderful. Keep writing! I would like to read more.

[Tony Jordan]

The message is un-ignorable.
Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You did well. You expressed thoughts and emotions with skill. Thank you Natehy for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Franky]

I can relate. Definitely.

[mournful bear]

tell yourself you have it all to boost your pride, yet at the end the truth comes out. you don't have anything, or had from others. great penning!! shows a lot of sorrow to be coming. we've all been here, some of us that still remember such days, yet hard to forget; but makes us what we are today. thanks for sharing

[HeyJadeXO]

Materialism vs feeling such a battle

[wordman]

we don`t have any thing if we don`t have love