Cure Me

As I dream at night I try my best not to dream of you,

yet I always do.

When I close my eyes I pray that you don't haunt my thoughts, 

yet you always do. 

Why is it that my mind can't wipe out the existence of you? 

Though I still question if our love was ever true, I prat to God for only the best for you. 

Why do I still hold on to the hope of me and you? 

When clearly the lose of me from your life as done nothing to you. 

I fill my thoughts with the hope of new love and a cherished heart. 

I've dedicated years of my life into what was to be our future, its scary to have to restart. 

I swear I see your face at every corner I turn. 

I just want it to stop, every blood cell in my heart burns. 

Can someone help me before I go insane,

I'm searching for the cure of this disease called pain.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

You've nailed the anguish of pain right on the money. Excellent! I enjoyed reading your work.
Bec

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you very much!

[Jack...]

Very cool my friend. We may try to forget, put them out of our minds but they never seem to disappear completely. Nicely penned my friend.

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yup its hard to let go...
Thank you very much :)

[Rose Diamond]

Now, I'm very inexperienced when it comes to heartbreak, but this piece made me feel every damn emotion! The fact that you're able to transfer all of these feelings to someone who has never felt them is just so amazing, I can't even word it properly!

Excellent job! :D

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Wow, I am truly grateful that you were able to feel the emotion in it. I poured every ounce of emotion I had into it.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it :)

[A. Amos]

Thank you Rosie, you will truly enjoyed her work as she is insanely talented:)

[Rose Diamond]

I would LOVE to read more of your work, the only problem is is that your profile is rated Mature, so I can't access it D:

Of course, I will try my best to read your works that I can get access to! :)

[A. Amos]

I really don't understand why it's rated mature:) I don't have anything erotica;) well in mean time me and Natalie can read your work and support you, so no worries you just keep writing

[Rose Diamond]

I appreciate that a lot! I'll do my best to read and support the work of both you and Natalie whenever I get the chance. I think I can read your pieces if they're sent in a Read Request, so if you guys want me to read anything, just send me one and I'll try to get to them once I can. :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

I have been reading your work Rosie, you are very talented. I will definitely continue reading your work and I know Amos will too :)

Yeah, I do have some mature work on my profile. Its from a novella I wrote. Whenever you're interested in reading it I can send you the amazon link :)

[Rose Diamond]

You guys flatter me way too much! xD Thank you, I'm thrilled that you enjoy my work.

I would love to read your novella, so you can send me the link any time. I probably wouldn't be able to read it tonight, but I'm off all week, so I'd be thrilled to start it!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Good work deserves to be recognized. So enjoy the flattery :)

Great here is the link: http://www.amazon.com/Worth-The-Risk-Natalie-Dieudonné-ebook/dp/B00FKMN6HC/

I hope you enjoy it :)

[Rose Diamond]

Thanks, I'll try and read it once I can! :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome :)

[wordman]

I close my eyes and I drift away into that magic place where you stay
loved the poem and the theme of it read your bio congratulations
ron

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you very much.

I really enjoy your reviews :)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

"Though I still question if our love was ever true, I prat to God for only the best for you.
Why do I still hold on to the hope of me and you?
When clearly the lose of me from your life as done nothing to you."

You ask relevant questions about the dilemma of love and how it touches us to the cores. Those who want to fight it can't or try to escape from it will find it hard...Bravo.............

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you very much...

It's hard to let go of the one you've loved for so long and when we do we often find ourselves asking these questions. Yet still now my questions are unanswered. Thus this is the way of love and heartbreak....

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true. You are welcome...:).................

[A. Amos]

This is interesing and mesmerzing piece, simply beautiful

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you my friend. Your words are always great to hear :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and nice picture of wolf...

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Its my inner beast :)

[A. Amos]

So finally you bought her out:)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Yeah, she's been kept in for too long :)

[A. Amos]

Cool will waiting to read, adventures of the beast...

[Linda alexander]

When I close my eyes I pray that you don't haunt my thoughts,
yet you always do.
Excellent write, fully succeeded in portraying the pain caused by broken heart, no adulteration or exaggeration, only truth from heart simply took shapes of the poem, the haunting is ridiculously horrible, and annoying which hinders one to live in the present and can even paralyze, very hard to explain, this will be ongoing process as love exists in myocardial cells of supple heart, impressed, enjoyed each lines
Linda

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Thank you Linda for your kind words... Yes, the haunting truly is ridiculous, but writing is my therapy :)

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care