excuses, excuses.

excuses, excuses.

A Poem by leinahtan
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the emergence of this poem was pressured by Inday Abbie. lol! but the idea in this prose poem is inspired by Gestalt Therapy Verbatim, a book to an approach on psychotherapy founded by Fritz Perls.:)

"
is it that hard to admit 
that what is, is just is?
then abuse and misuse
what reasons to excuse?
but is there an excuse
for the sky being blue?
or for a love being true?
you think you have a clue
but leave it alone, can you?
you ask why is a rose
is a rose is a rose?
what cause can cause 
a cause be a cause?
does reason really end?
you're mind-f*****g, my friend. 
no, you don't need to explain!
what so if you're insane?
there is no one to blame.
is there a reason for your name?
what i am is just me,
you don't ask why i came to be.
i am me and so i am free,
and i am unafraid
to show the world and let'em see
that letting it be can make us glee.
what's so wrong with genuineness? 
and with happiness? with youth?
and so what if they won't take my truth?
i would. always. 
for there no mistakes,
was simply born this way. 
i might bring you dismay
but what more can i say?
"a rose is a rose is a rose."
how's that for a good prose?
so excuse me for asking you this
but...
just don't ever make me no excuses.

© 2011 leinahtan


Author's Note

leinahtan
"true words are not beautiful; beautiful words are not true." ~ Book of Tao

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a rose is a rose is a rose.... ,crhfw'ed'hgawldWQ"jfhgaew'dldfb!!! haha

Posted 6 Years Ago


EEEEEKKKK DODONG NAT NAT!!!!!

wow, we use to totally crazy! Lol rereading made me remember :P I now know what they say when they tell me i speak backwords (asain thing) lol
hope life is treating you well Dodong:)

In God We Trust
~a
100.100

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 8 Years Ago


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From the way its crafted to the perfect sense of elegance and rhyme. Oh, and also how it makes you think... :) Mann I just love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


A sliding mass of contradiction and sheer poetic brilliance, well done, good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Perfectly written, and full of such truth. this is a piece that needs to be read, and we'd all do well to abide by it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahahaha AYUS :) I writing a poem about individuality. I'm 1/4 done. ahaha well, not done --If we were in a Gestalt Lexicon Conversation. ahahaha

INDAY! HAHAHA DODONG! HAHAHAHA

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's what I thought:)
Hehe, oh yea I won!:)
But I really really think that you won the excuse contest:P

~inday

Posted 8 Years Ago


Excellent deep write, great stuff, love psychology aspect and its interpretation..

Posted 8 Years Ago


hahahahahahahaha. XD she's right. she's right folks, t'was just my excuse. hahahah

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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